This is the first of the wallpapers I have developed with the suggestions I made earlier, it is still hard to see with not having a print out however the colour added to the background does work better. There are changes I still feel it needs the background colour needs to be much lighter everything just blends in together and now I think its suited more towards older people which is really not the outcome or audience I was hoping for. I really dont think there is much more i can do until I get feedback from the crit next week.
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