After my crit today i realised these boards really were not working and it probably was one of the most helpful crits that some of the previous ones we have had. I realised there was far too much going on, they were too cluttered and busy especially board 3. The second improvement is my work doesn't even fit these boards, they need to follow the theme of my work much more, even simply by changing the type face. So im going to have a re think and re make my boards following the advice given to me in the crit and see how they are working then.
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